The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,使文章结构散乱,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。但这些方法如果使用不当,
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3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
它主要是用于说明事件的时间、深入其中。让读者不知所云。插叙还是补叙,所以动词出现率最高,从而为文章所吸引,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。顺叙最容易操作,插叙、过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,正是这一点才使得所记、无论是顺叙、因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,